Revision

I started my revision as soon as I completed my first draft. My first draft yall was so horrible I didn't know what questions to ask or nothing. As we sat in class and talked about different things and different questions my mind started lingering. I mean my questions were just popping up in my head. Soon after I had the interview then started on my second draft. My second draft came out much better than the first but still needed work. After the super bowl I put on my thinking cap and came out with a pretty good draft. For my final draft I just need to revise it one more time before I turn it in.