Revising my paper

I am in the final stages of finishing my paper, it just needs to be tweaked a little bit and it will be good. I am glad this is the last paper for the semester.

Completing My Paper

In the writing lab Friday my group had a lot accomplished. I want to thank Terrence and Danielle, and the writing teacher Josh for all their help. The first thing I want to say was that I thought I went into the lab with a good paper kind of but of course came out with some negatives and positives. I had recieved some clear ideas on how I should elongate my paper and make it even better. One thing our group came apart of is that I had more solutions than the problem and I was stating my opinion and not looking on the other side the fence I mean people that think different. I want to know do I really have to state the other side of the fence, but to make my paper long I think so. Anyways, I think my paper is coming along well.

Finished my paper

I recently just finished my paper. i feel that it is more informational and should provide vital information in convincing the reader to understand the reasoning behind legalizing cannabis. If any of you would like to read my paper and or make comments on it on areas where i could improve or could fix due to errors please let me know and i will email you a copy of my paper! thank you.

Issues within Discourse Community

Some issues within my discourse community is plenty. One of the main issues within this community im doing is steroids. Another issue can be academics and age being a problem for High School athletic team. I found a lot of issues within the community but the problem I am having is to find someone to write it to.

The Last Paper

This last paper is a rough one. It requires a lot of research and reading. If I had of known this paper would come from the topic of the paper before I would have done something less stressing.

problems for hippies

Because the hippies are now older they face some consequences that reflect on their counterculture ways that they partook in the 70's. Because of protests, rebellion, and the idea of the hippie communes a lot of them dropped out of school. Therefore, many of them now dont have the education to get a good job. There in itself lies a problem. If anyone has any more ideas about what some problems are in the hippie community please let me know.

My Paper

For my paper I've decided to go with animal rights. A lot of Buddhist tend to be vegetarians, so I'm going to consecrate on how farmers keep the conditions for the animals that are going to be slaughter extremely poor. I'm also going to incorporate that these farmer's should be punished if the conditions aren't what they are suppose to be.